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Atlantis

O Great Atlantis

All of your glory betrayed you

All of your beauty has withered

Though peace you claimed

Peace you did not live

What you sent forth into the universe

The universe gave back to you

Atlantis

Atlantis

Ruins to be found by aliens among us

 

2/18/10 7:50 PM

 

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20 Responses to “Atlantis”

  1. Love the ending –
    Ruins to be found by aliens among us

  2. awesome word flow..
    love the imagery…

    let me know if you are interested in attending poets rally.

  3. welcome in…

    visit and comment for a minimum 18 poets from my participant list, let me know after you are done, have fun!

    Glad to have you share with talent here.
    🙂

  4. What a wonderful poetic story, and a perfect ending as well. 🙂

  5. Wonderful poem! Really simple and so effective! I love poems that refer to myths and legends like Atlantis! Brilliant!

    If you want to return the favour, I think you’ll eenjoy my post:
    http://thoughtunchained.wordpress.com/2010/12/02/red-planet-writer/

  6. great piece. loved the ending. imaginative!

  7. Nice! Love anything having to do with Atlantis.

    Here from Jingle’s Thursday Poets Rally … a bit late, but I’m here … Hope you enjoy your visits and visitors.

    Jamie Dedes

  8. great piece 🙂

  9. I am developing a blog and and i want to change the theme.Yours looks pretty decent! Feel free to visit my blog and suggest things!


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